"Boring"? Nonsense! This is my lucky day/night/day! XD Of course it would take me so long to comment on Part 2 that you release more, but I'm not complaining.
Ooooh, where to begin. Well first of all, I'm completely grossed out by the description of Malik's arm but I love it. It's fascinating (in a weird way) and I'm a pansy when it comes to blood anyway, but it seemed very realistic to imagine it growing back this way instead of just *poof!* and then arm.
I also love how you're handling Altair/Maria along with Altair/Malik. It is just hitting all my buttons right now so I've very much looking forward to more. <3
Re: FILL [3.b/?]
Ooooh, where to begin. Well first of all, I'm completely grossed out by the description of Malik's arm but I love it. It's fascinating (in a weird way) and I'm a pansy when it comes to blood anyway, but it seemed very realistic to imagine it growing back this way instead of just *poof!* and then arm.
I also love how you're handling Altair/Maria along with Altair/Malik. It is just hitting all my buttons right now so I've very much looking forward to more. <3