Nooo, please don't feel abandoned by your readers! Sorry for not commenting more on the updates, I love this fic dearly, but anything I can say just feels so inadequate compared to the amount of work and effort you put into writting this!
But I really like your straightforward Altair. And I can't even object to your characterization of Ezio as petty and revengeful, since he does possess many disagreeable qualities alongside his good ones. Selfishness, most of all. And I love how thoroughly you've written the whole process of Malik sorting out his feelings. It really makes you feel for the character!
Reading this story is a real pleasure, so thank you for not abandoning it for one reason or another!
Re: Altered Flight Pattern (83/?)
Sorry for not commenting more on the updates, I love this fic dearly, but anything I can say just feels so inadequate compared to the amount of work and effort you put into writting this!
But I really like your straightforward Altair. And I can't even object to your characterization of Ezio as petty and revengeful, since he does possess many disagreeable qualities alongside his good ones. Selfishness, most of all.
And I love how thoroughly you've written the whole process of Malik sorting out his feelings. It really makes you feel for the character!
Reading this story is a real pleasure, so thank you for not abandoning it for one reason or another!