WOW! Malik is SO himself here, I could hear his actor saying the words! Yusuf was great too. It would have been easy to slip into writing Yusuf like Altair, since Altair-bugging-Malik is such a popular genre, but you've written him nimble of tongue and cheerful of spirit just he's supposed to be!

Just, NICE JOB with the characterization! And don't worry about the lack of porn, the story seemed to end where it was supposed to, and that's more important.