"don't worry about the lack of porn, the story seemed to end where it was supposed to, and that's more important."

This is pretty much what I was thinking by my own reply about "letting our minds fill in the blanks" -- I'm not sure how much "less is more" applies, but this story definitely didn't wear out its welcome, and I'm sincerely happy to have read it from beginning to end.

Good job, author-anon!