I love your writing style, the description of the character's environnement is fabulous, detailed but not boring, just enough to picture correctly the scene. I really liked the atmosphere in the beginning, and the cute scene with the younger children ! D'awww !
Altaïr is so tired, poor guy, he is only fifteen and already he has to take care of his siblings. I wonder how it affects his live outside the house, does he even go to school ? And Ezio wants to help and seems so mature for his age !
I appreciate that their lifestyle is "realist". Wow, this is so interesting, I wonder where this is going, I'm so curious and excited !I'm going to read the second chapter right away.
Re: Fill: Orphaned. 1/?
I love your writing style, the description of the character's environnement is fabulous, detailed but not boring, just enough to picture correctly the scene. I really liked the atmosphere in the beginning, and the cute scene with the younger children ! D'awww !
Altaïr is so tired, poor guy, he is only fifteen and already he has to take care of his siblings. I wonder how it affects his live outside the house, does he even go to school ? And Ezio wants to help and seems so mature for his age !
I appreciate that their lifestyle is "realist". Wow, this is so interesting, I wonder where this is going, I'm so curious and excited !I'm going to read the second chapter right away.
Unf, I love you author anon !