Someone wrote in [personal profile] asscreedkinkmeme 2013-05-28 01:45 am (UTC)

Re: FILL ---------10 (part 2) of ? -------Enthralled

Holy fuck, anon, I absolutely love the way you wrote the relation between Ziio and Haytham, and oh, the precarious happiness of the flashback (and Haytham being able to see his son grow up, even if just for a short period of time!) combined with the inevitable heartbreak is so well-done, and the flashforward to Ziio finding out about Haytham is succinct and completely gutwrenching. Seriously, this is amazingly written, and I just can't get over how good this is.

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