Believe it or not, the relative quietness of this chapter really works and you've done a great job of expressing Connor's anxiety, and it makes me super nervous because Achilles must have guessed that Connor did *something* he wasn't supposed to. I love Dobby's reactions and the tensions arising with the rest of the Brotherhood, even though we don't see them we get a good taste of how everybody is being affected.
*crosses fingers and hopes that Connor can somehow use his relationship with Haytham to make the conflict between order and brotherhood less bloody, and that Achilles won't be really really mad at Connor*
Re: Fill: Who Will Save You Now? [12.5/?]
Believe it or not, the relative quietness of this chapter really works and you've done a great job of expressing Connor's anxiety, and it makes me super nervous because Achilles must have guessed that Connor did *something* he wasn't supposed to. I love Dobby's reactions and the tensions arising with the rest of the Brotherhood, even though we don't see them we get a good taste of how everybody is being affected.
*crosses fingers and hopes that Connor can somehow use his relationship with Haytham to make the conflict between order and brotherhood less bloody, and that Achilles won't be really really mad at Connor*