I finally got to read the previous chapter and this chapter today and god you don't disappoint! I was delightfully pleased to see Desmond calling Ellen's ex "vermin", showing that he is adapting to the Pre-Revolutionary period vernacular. Btw, you have a talent in utilizing emotion! I could feel Ezio's anger radiating from the computer screen just picturing how Desmond panics - poor Desmond. Still not wholly used to the RealLife!Assassin life. And reading the part when Ezio tries out the iPhone...I really expected for Ezio to scream because the music was on loud/he accidentally played the music too loud (Maybe he did off-screen and now he's pouncing on Desmond for payback XD. But seriously, if Ezio was furious when Desmond fought like an assassin...oh dear, what will he do when he finds out that Achilles knows /all/? Dammit Achilles, you so sly~ Can't wait to see the next chappie :D
Re: Fill: Every hour God sends, part 8
Btw, you have a talent in utilizing emotion! I could feel Ezio's anger radiating from the computer screen just picturing how Desmond panics - poor Desmond. Still not wholly used to the RealLife!Assassin life.
And reading the part when Ezio tries out the iPhone...I really expected for Ezio to scream because the music was on loud/he accidentally played the music too loud (Maybe he did off-screen and now he's pouncing on Desmond for payback XD.
But seriously, if Ezio was furious when Desmond fought like an assassin...oh dear, what will he do when he finds out that Achilles knows /all/? Dammit Achilles, you so sly~
Can't wait to see the next chappie :D