;_____; I luv you anon. Seriously, I never expected this kind of a response to my prompt. I really loved the end of this, even though it's a little disjointed like you said. I think my favorite parts there at the end were Desmond randomly lapsing into other languages, the driveby rescue, and Rebeca prodding Shaun's pudge, lol.
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Thank you so much, awesome anon!