I just went through an emotional roller coaster reading this: starting with sympathetic guilt, anxiety, relief, YAYSTARTINGWITHTHERIDINGCROPNOW, OMGFUCKINGHOTYEAH, and finally so much tenderness for both of them that I just want to steal them from Ubisoft's storyline and run away with them somewhere they could live happily ever after. Something that appears like BDSM fun first then turns out to be laden with so much foreshadowing of the future tragedy that the pathos is really affecting.
I don't have much words other than your fill's ending makes me want to find a nice quiet corner and grieve cry my fangirl heart out.
Re: The Price of Failure [6/6]
I just went through an emotional roller coaster reading this: starting with sympathetic guilt, anxiety, relief, YAYSTARTINGWITHTHERIDINGCROPNOW, OMGFUCKINGHOTYEAH, and finally so much tenderness for both of them that I just want to steal them from Ubisoft's storyline and run away with them somewhere they could live happily ever after. Something that appears like BDSM fun first then turns out to be laden with so much foreshadowing of the future tragedy that the pathos is really affecting.
I don't have much words other than your fill's ending makes me want to find a nice quiet corner and
grievecry my fangirl heart out.