If I were a director, I would make this a short flim because the way you execute the scenes... I just... I feel like I'm watching a movie even though I'm reading.
Especially love the scene when all Hell breaks loose. For some reason, I imagined everything around Altaïr and Malik happening in slow-motion, but they themselves would be in normal time. And there would be a zoom-in of their kiss, with Malik's trembling fingers... and just... yes.
And as Altaïr is being dragged away, everything goes back to real time and cue black screen until Malik is in his cell, just smoking and grinning.
I'm not OP but my god, I couldn't be more satisfied. I tip my hat to you, kind anon.
Re: Slop Day, Every Day (7/7) of [1/1]
If I were a director, I would make this a short flim because the way you execute the scenes... I just... I feel like I'm watching a movie even though I'm reading.
Especially love the scene when all Hell breaks loose. For some reason, I imagined everything around Altaïr and Malik happening in slow-motion, but they themselves would be in normal time. And there would be a zoom-in of their kiss, with Malik's trembling fingers... and just... yes.
And as Altaïr is being dragged away, everything goes back to real time and cue black screen until Malik is in his cell, just smoking and grinning.
I'm not OP but my god, I couldn't be more satisfied. I tip my hat to you, kind anon.