Someone wrote in [personal profile] asscreedkinkmeme 2011-02-26 02:57 am (UTC)

Re: The Moon and the Tide [6/?]

I haven't the words to describe my love for this but I'll give it a try.

I wish this fic was a paperback that I could curl up with and read over and over. I just adore where you're going with this prompt and I love how you've written these two. Malik's frustration is almost tangible and the glimpse of how much Altair cares for his gifts made my heart ache just the tiniest bit. I actually get goosebumps when I picture the scene when(if??) he realizes who Malik really is.

Also, this?
The man takes three steps to cross the room, a breath to grab Malik’s wrist, and a blink to bend it back so that Malik can feel his bones strain in protest.
Made my heart stop. I was a little worried for Malik there for a second.

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