Damn, I need to stop biting my cheeks in excitement; seriously, writer!anon, this is really great: Like, FLAMING GREAT. This is admittedly more than I expected, and the jealousy factor that I see here only makes me want to hug myself with moony eyes. I could literally detect Giovanni's youth just by the way he talks, same with Old Man Ezio. I see that you took one of my suggestions! Nice!
Grinning here, knowing that this isn't over. Good job, and I hope to see more of this soon!
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Grinning here, knowing that this isn't over. Good job, and I hope to see more of this soon!