Was just scrolling through my email today and found this gem of a story buried in-between my spam.
Color me surprised, but I am not sure why I am only one who has commented on this by now. And undeservedly so. Anyway, I wanted to tell you, anon, your story hit all of my buttons somewhat fierce! In my opinion a very good fill. How could it not be, you wrote Malik as a sub in BDSM realtionship And I like the way writeranon deals with the issue of trust in the latter parts, nice job. Transition from kinky to angsty then easing back in to kinky without ruining the flow? Seems like a very nice storytelling to me.
Please do not get discouraged by the lack of feedback, anon. Keep writing, you're doing it just great!
Re: Passerby
Color me surprised, but I am not sure why I am only one who has commented on this by now. And undeservedly so. Anyway, I wanted to tell you, anon, your story hit all of my buttons somewhat fierce! In my opinion a very good fill. How could it not be, you wrote Malik as a sub in BDSM realtionship And I like the way writeranon deals with the issue of trust in the latter parts, nice job. Transition from kinky to angsty then easing back in to kinky without ruining the flow? Seems like a very nice storytelling to me.
Please do not get discouraged by the lack of feedback, anon. Keep writing, you're doing it just great!