Okay, let me just say, much as I adore you for taking my prompt and turning it into something beautiful, more than anything I absolutely love your writing. Your dialogue, your descriptions, everyone being so in character, and the fact that you have great grammar.

Also, you're not alone in thinking Desmond looked too skinny in AC3. That was intentional, though, I think. Because he had just come out of the coma that he'd been in through out all of 'AC: Revelations,' right?


-OP