Kink Meme - Assassin's Creed pt.2

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Assassin's Creed Kink Meme pt.2
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Welcome to the Brotherhood

∆ Comment anonymously with a character/pairing and a kink/prompt.

∆ Comment is filled by another anonymous with fanfiction/art/or any other appropriate medium.

∆ One request per post, but fill the request as much as you want.

∆ The fill/request doesn't necessarily need to be smut.

∆ Don't flame, if you have nothing good to say, don't say anything.

∆ Have a question? Feel free to PM me.

∆ Last, but not least: HAVE FUN!

List of Kinks
(Livejorunal) Archive
#2 (Livejournal) Archive
(Delicious.com) Archive
(Dreamwidth) Archive <- Currently active
Part 1
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
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Discussion

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Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

(sorry for slow posting, i had it written up but my mom accidentaly deleted it)
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Altair grumbled cursing the idiot flight atendants, the slow airlines and his stupid brother for making him come to this stupid thing! All of his anger suddenly left him when he felt his lovers head nuzzel into his shoulder and his arms wrap around him mumbling about being tired as they were finaly seated after four hours. Altair sighed wrapping his arms around his lover and allowing a slight smile to grace his lips. "Albi, are oyu ok? Arent you excited about your brother getting married?" Altair looked into the bright, twinkling eyes of his younger lover, Kadar (YES KADAR!! >D lol We needs more kadar andweallknowhewashotforaltairscocksoNYEH!! :P) He pressed a light kiss to his forehead "Yes habibi, i am very happy to know that Desmond has found love, such as I have" Kadar keened snuggling closer into his lover. Altair rolled his eyes resting his elbow on the armrest, accidentaly bumping into a vary heavy set spanish man who seemed to be screaming dragging two adults along, one a very handsome Spanish man and another a very voluptuous blonde, both looking at each other as if not caring they were caught for, whatever. Altair was still amazed at how his young lover brought out the romantic sap in him. "So Altair, what is this Shaun guy like?"



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May post more in a little bit, wanna see how oyu guys like it so far ^^

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

I'm sorry, I couldn't bear to read passed the authors comment you decided for some reason to wedge in the middle of your mini fill. Please never do something like that again.

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

If you're going to criticise a person for writing something (in an entirely uncouth way, I must say), at least attempt to use words correctly.

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

For real. There's a much nicer way to offer constructive criticism.

idk what's up, but I've been seeing some really rude comments lately.
Just because we're anon doesn't mean we have to be chodes about it.

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

A: It was like 3:00 am excuse me if i was little tired and silly

b: this is a full fill, i just couldn't pump much out, it will get better

c: If your going to be a jerk, please at least try to do it a little more constructively

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

Altair sighed looking up at the frowning face of his lovers brother Malik, who had insisted on coming. "Well hes nice enough, a bit of an ass" Out of the corner of his eye his saw Kadar reaching for his bag, most likely for his I-pod already bored with the conversation. "Bit of a sarcastic asshole though, frankly I don't see the attraction." Altair went to pull his arm away when he realized he was tangled in Kadar's headphones. Suddenly the sounds of passionate love making filled their cabin as Kadar turned bright red and Altair and Malik looked horrified. Kadar quickly scrambled to turn it off as his boyfriend and brother stared slack jawed at him. "WERE YOU LISTENING TO PORN ON YOUR I-POD!?" Kadar blushed furiously burrowing into his seat to avoid the stares of the passengers and instead finding great interest in a speck of dirt on the window next to him. Altair slumped into his seat sighing as Malik continued to stare in horror at his once innocent little brother mumbling about how it was all Altair's fault. Altair reached up to press the call button that would summon the stewardess only to have the attractive brunette, who was wearing headphones for some odd reason, rush past him and tell him she would be their in a moment, Altair's eagle sense told him this would be the first of many rushing stewardess's and he would not, in fact, get the Asprin he was going to ask for, and had a feeling he would need greatly.

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

not to be ~rude~ but have you perhaps thought about getting a beta for your work? it's not badly written, there are just some mistakes that could be easily fixed.

also, it's iPod, not I-pod. Commas, apostrophes and the enter button are your bffs.

stewardess's =/= stewardesses.

this has alot of potential, to be honest. it just needs some editing. i hope i didn't come off as too rude. :(

Re: Slow ass idiots! [1/?]

[(Anonymous)]

...Pretty sure Ezio is Italian. Just saying. I also agree with the other anons requesting never to put an authors comment in the middle, it is EXTREMELY distracting to the story, and there are plenty of people who like Kadar, so it doesn't even matter. You have your preferences, but you don't have to shout them out in the middle of your fic. I also noticed that you used the word lover many times in your fic. I would suggest trying to find a different name once in awhile.